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 | The Coffee Monkey  [E] Morning coffee - served with humor and a little help from the animal kingdom  |
| (5.0)| Hi foxtale This review is a part of "Game of Thrones" [13+].  Overall Impression: What a sweet little story this is! It brought a smile to my face, and I am certain that many readers will appreciate its gentle humour. First of all, I could understand your feelings about getting a new dog. I felt the same way after my previous cats passed away. When you've had them in your life for so long, it's not so easy to reattach to new kitten - or a puppy, in your case. I can well imagine your daughter wearing you down, though. I remember how I used to persuade my mom to let me have a pet. There's a lot of warmth to this story. You have a lovely writing voice. I didn't see that last paragraph coming, and it's great because it shows a happy, healthy relationship. It's no wonder that your marriage is measured in decades! All in all, you have done an excellent job here. This is simply lovely. Suggestions: I have no suggestions, dear author. Not helpful, I know, but you clearly know what you're doing. The spelling's great, grammar's great and everything is as it should be. Again, well done! My Rating: This is a sweet piece that, as you can tell, I very much enjoyed. A recommended read! I had no suggestions. Therefore, I will give this item the 5-star rating it deserves. Thank you for sharing your work. Write on! Kit  The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 04/10/2024 @ 10:41am EDT