Fire to Ashes [13+] A dark to light story |
Hello Joy! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones" . Hmmm. This is a poignant, supernatural story. A story that comes close to what many young men are told and believe. This young man received a second chance. When he awakened from his sure death, he was glad to find himself alive. The promises he was told did not happen. Where was his nirvana when he crossed over? Where were all of the things he was promised? Instead of feeling like he was walking on thick moss, he found himself falling down, further and further. There was nothing but darkness. The relationship between the two characters is strong. The reader can see how much the main character relied on the woman, who walked away, leaving him with questions that would go unanswered. The scenery and actions are vivid, and enable the reader to envision each scene as the story moves along. I like the ending when he makes a promise that everyone will know the truth, that the promises are just lies. Don't die for them. Below are a few suggestions. Please use or discard them as you see fit, if it was the enemy, if it were the enemy, but still he heaped Comma needed after still shining of iridescent shining with iridescent wild fires wildfires Thank you so much for sharing your story with us. I enjoyed it. Tracey The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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