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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

"Game of Thrones"  Hello Fellow Writer! My name is Sandra. I am one of the sly foxes.First Impression: What a nice, caring individual I think of the narrator. He not only notices a stray senior wandering through his neighbourhood, he decides to assist him. A meal is offered to the walker and he in turn shares some stories and history with his benefactor. I would say that is a great trade. We should all appreciate what seniors have to offer. All we have to do is give up some of our free time and listen. The ending is unexpected. These two men are not strangers at all, although one endures Alzheimer's. What needs your attention: Nothing. I like this story as is. What part I liked best: The opening sentence sets the subsequent scene and hints at something amiss. Like wise, the ending is a complete revelation. Slowly, the stranger's need to meander and depart the care facility is revealed. He has memory loss. I like that you do not glorify this, or become sentimental/weepy. Dancing with Alzheimer's is a delicate venture. The repetition can be monotonous and inevitable. Sadly, Alzheimer's respects no one.Overall Impression: This is a great, subtle piece of writing. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure. What does the fox say??? Listen carefully.(1369 Characters)DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions in this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.