"Game of Thrones"  "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 



Hi Warped Sanity, yeah I'm still here. Blame it on Gaby.

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Free

First Impression: This was so good, I read it twice. That doctor deserved what he got. I wondered when he placed the clipboard over his lap to hide his arousal if she was going to be raped. I'm so glad she wasn't. I love when women take control of the situation and free themselves.

What needs your attention: I didn't see any punctuation or grammar but as you know i don't look either. I prefer reading for the enjoyment.

What part I liked best: I loved when she grabbed his tie pulling him forward and his first instinct was to grab her boobs. He didn't have a clue what was coming next. Yay for her. Even when her voice changed he was powerless to extradite himself, I was very happy that he couldn't.

Overall impression: I loved how you used the required prompt as she was telling him about the demon and their exchange like it was a conversation between two friends. The characters were realistic. The pacing o the story workrd very well.
I need to pay attention more to the contests on WDC.

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