Hello Hope! Bravo! What a fun story! I thought it was very clever of you to write a story from the point of view of a lipstick which belonged to a celebrity! Very unique, indeed!

I liked that you included a link to the prompt. I think that added to having your readers appreciate the twist that you put in the challenge prompt.

You were asked to write a story from a Taylor Swift song (That attracted me to your story, by the way, because my daughter likes Taylor Swift and has been to one of her concerts a few months ago.), and you wrote about Taylors lipstick getting interviewed. That took creative imagination, and I loved that idea.

I felt that you, 'set the stage' well, with giving your readers the vision of the red carpet lights, hearing the song from the loud speakers in the background, and seeing the excited reports with their microphones waiting to get the Lipstick's voice captured.

I chuckled when I read the name you gave to the character - L.I.P. Stick! That added to the fun of your story! Your reader's were able to get a glimpse of the excitement the little lipstick must have also felt, 'waking up in Taylors makeup bag'. I didn't know the ingredients of a lipstick. I'll assume you did a little research to find that out, and it was great to include that in the narration of your story.

It was funny to add that small gossip about how many times Lipstick said Taylor reapplied it! Also, the QR code was hilarious! It was a smart way to stick the name of the song in the story. Well done.

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