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Hi Bear

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: RSVP

First Impression: Congratulations on being published. There's nothing like that feeling of validation. I love the feeling of progression this poem offers as the narrator shares moments in time. Is some one listening. Like the narrator I'm not always sure either. Are my reactions because of another's silence.

What needs your attention: Not a thing. This poem conveys a solid story in its free style form.

What part I liked best: The last stanza for me has the most powerful imagery a life filled with treasures that can be savored once again because they were never sent.

I took a class in college about healing one's self. The professor suggested writing letters to the different people we crossed paths with in our lives, not just the ones that hurt us but also the ones who brought us joy. Put them in an envelope and set them inside a box to opened in ten years for introspection. I was surprised at the things that upset me then no longer mattered. Some of the things I found joy with I had moved on as well. It's a great healing tool that I was reminded of reading your poem today.

Overall impression: Five stanzas of thought provoking imagery that invites the reader to consider what really matters in the end.

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What does the Fox say?????


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