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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

"Game of Thrones"  Hello fellow writer! My name is Sandra. I am one of the sly foxes. Title: The TestFirst Impression: What could the test possibly be? The title intrigued me, piqued my curiosity. I was commiserating with poor entrapped and disoriented Norveg. He was an unwilling prisoner fearing that he was about to be gassed. I felt his building terror and helplessness. It did not help his predicament that he had heard horror stories. It only fueled his growing panic. What needs your attention: Nothing. I have not noticed anything requiring your attention and subsequent editing.What I liked best: The building tension and distress of Norveg carried me along. I only knew what happened as they occurred to Norveg the narrator. Hey, this could be a Viking's name. I suppose I reacted as he reacted. I am not saying I enjoyed reading about his near-might-have-been death. I am stating I liked the suspense and the relief when he realized he was not about to die. His terrible fears amounted to nothing. Haha, he was a test subject and he had passed with flying colours. Something known as FDA approved of his reaction. Perhaps Norveg would argue about the supposed "no harmful effects." He was left puzzled as to what had happened, but he was grateful to be alive. It was a funny moment when I discovered Norveg to be a lab rat. Without any studying, or undue prompting he was deemed acceptable and as a reward he was going home. Talk about bewildered. I like that this tail was told with the lab rat's viewpoint. He had the front row perspective.Overall Impression: Kudos for another humorous story making great use of given prompt words. This was not what I was expecting and I liked the surprise. Thank you for allowing me to read your work, It has been my pleasure! What does the fox say??? Listen carefully.(1911 characters)DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions in this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.