Greetings Purple Holiday Princess !

I am currently reviewing as part of the tasks set by the "Game of Thrones" . I especially visited your port to dig your most precious gems then this piece appeared. In this review, I mainly focus on the positives of your piece and I may point some Areas for Improvement if found any. Without much a do, here are the things I noticed after delving deeper into the contents:


"My Wish" transcends the physical realm to capture the essence of a love that offers unwavering comfort and security. The poem, likely spoken from a parental figure, employs a gentle and intimate tone, weaving a warm and safe space through the imagery of holding a loved one close and feeling the steady rhythm of their heartbeat.

One of the poem's strengths lies in its masterful use of repetition to evoke a sense of constant presence. Lines like "always feel me" and "I'm always there beside you" act as a soothing mantra, reassuring the listener of unwavering support. This sentiment is further amplified by the beautiful metaphor of being "nestled deep within your soul," implying a connection that transcends the physical and becomes an inseparable part of the listener's being.

The poem acknowledges the inevitable fear of loss that can accompany deep love, expressed in the line "You may think I have gone." However, it swiftly dismantles this fear with the evocative image: "close your eyes and see." This line invites the listener to find solace in a sensory experience – the feeling of gentle caresses. This tangible reminder becomes a powerful symbol of the enduring connection that persists even in moments of physical separation. The poem concludes with a powerful message – that even when physical proximity is absent, the essence of love, a constant and comforting presence, remains.

Overall, "My Wish" is a beautifully crafted poem that utilizes simple yet evocative language and imagery to convey a profound message. It speaks to the universal desire for connection and security, offering comfort and reassurance through its portrayal of a love that transcends physical limitations. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic