Greetings H❀pe !

I am currently reviewing as part of the tasks set by the "Game of Thrones" . I especially visited your port to dig your most precious gems then this piece appeared. In this review, I mainly focus on the positives of your piece and I may point some Areas for Improvement if found any. Without much a do, here are the things I noticed after delving deeper into the contents:


"Somewhere in a Forest Near You" weaves a whimsical narrative that subverts expectations with a delightful blend of suspense and warmth. The poem establishes a cozy atmosphere with a cheerful chalet and a happy family enjoying a game of darts. This idyllic scene is disrupted by the arrival of a mysterious figure wielding an axe, building tension that feels reminiscent of a classic horror story.

However, the poem takes a surprising turn when the family's kindness shines through. Their lack of suspicion towards the stranger, coupled with Tommy's astute observation about the axe's condition, injects humor and disarms the reader. The revelation of the "lumberjack's" true intentions - simply lost and ill-equipped - combined with the family's welcoming response, transforms the potential threat into a heartwarming encounter.

The poem's strength lies in its ability to play with genre conventions. While the initial setup suggests a dark turn, the narrative unfolds with a focus on human connection and hospitality. The consistent rhyme scheme and playful language, like Sue's sassy response to Tommy, contribute to the poem's lighthearted tone.

The ending, however, presents the one point needing further development. The magical disappearance of the family, including their seemingly pet (?) Cottage, feels abrupt and leaves the reader wanting more. While it adds to the fantastical nature of the story, a touch more explanation or a smoother transition between the heartwarming resolution and the fantastical ending could elevate the poem.

Overall, "Somewhere in a Forest Near You" is a charming poem that offers a refreshing twist on suspense. It celebrates kindness and unexpected connections, leaving a smile on the reader's face. With a slight revision to the ending, this poem has the potential to be truly captivating. Thank you for sharing this. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic