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Hi Megan

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Wonderland Going Down the Rabbit Hole @

First Impression: I laughed seeing all the images in your folder for this activity, you're definitely enjoying the adventures in Wonderland. I noticed this was book 2 so you're doing it a second time.

What needs your attention: I feel like there should be a comma after Wonderland in your title. The book entries are in an order which works well for this activity. I didn't see anything I would change.

What part I liked best: I read your beginning and final entry in this journal. The one I noted in both entries is your lack of belief in your writing. Megan, you're a very capable writer. It's very obvious to this reader, you're passionate and tackle every writing experience with an open mind and anticipation of the journey.Please stop doubting yourself. We all see a talented author; you need too as well.

Overall impression: The author completed the tasks of Wonderland, kudos! Her detailed entries made this reader envious that she hasn't tried this activity herself. I found the entries fun to read.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.


What does the Fox say????? I'm really proud of you, Megan.


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