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 | Motherhood  [ASR] A glimpse... perhaps not the one most people see.  |
| (4.5)| GAMES OF THRONES STORY REVIEW In conjunction with:  This is a review for "Motherhood" from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones"  The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  THE STORYA raw, gritty look at the emotional toll motherhood can take on the psyche.  WHAT I LIKEDWhile not necessarily a heartwarming read, the vinyette focuses on places a majority of mothers have been, that raw, gritty place that has them facing their actions and wondering is it enough? And it's in these moments that we find our inner courage and strength to continue one task at a time.  POV NARRATION/TENSEThis is told in the first person by the narrator. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately. DESCRIPTIONSThere's enough to set the scenes. I liked; "Tears fell into her pillow, silent tears she only shed at night when she knew nobody would see or hear them." -- The description tugs on the emotional heartstrings of the reader. SETTINGTIME: modern day PLACE: quite house at night This is something that is clarified for the reader. CHARACTERSNarrator, mother Mom is bone tired. Finding inner strength and courage will come slowly at first with small tasks.  MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe title fits for the story, but can be expanded on to be a tad more reflective of the emotional beats the story produces. The opening engages the reader, who hopes for a positive outcome. A well done, emotional vinyette.  HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM"Anniversary Reviews"  Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen  }
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