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Hi Beholden

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Those Who Live IN Grass Houses Entry: A Slight Adjustment.

First Impression: As I read I wondered about the Grass Houses, then it hit me like a bread. It's the blog title not the story title which I corrected in the title area of this review.

Yes, reviews matter in the literary world and a reader who doesn't consider the broader scope of the star really shouldn't be reviewing. It can make or break an author's spirit.I've received some that made me question writing at all.

I'm trying to picture outrageously dashing hair in my head. What exactly is that?

What needs your attention: I didn't see anything I would change. I appreciate the larger font size.

What part I liked best: Mr. Rhodes discussing with Mr. Brenner about the one star he received and how it came to be. The questions asked and answers given in my mind would make for a great comedy routine.

Overall impression: The pacing was good throughout the story. Dialogue worked very well in keeping the story moving. I loved Mr. Rhodes parting comment to Sally when she asked if he got what he wanted and he replied I always do. Clearly that man knew how to debate.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.


What does the Fox say????? Nicely done!


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .