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Hallo Schnujo's Giving Away GPs ![]() ![]() I will be reviewing your work "The Contest Challenge" ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Here are a few things I noticed while reading. Please remember that these are only my suggestions/opinions and it's ultimately up to you to choose what works best. ![]() >> Under your 'Tips' section there are two invalid links >> Maybe it's to conserve space, but the extra info sections (Tips et. al) all joined together might be a tad bit difficult for some folks to read through. On my screen, it comes across as just one very long paragraph and words just bleed into each other at some point. (or maybe it's just reading so much with this GoT that's finally made me cross-eyed) ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Overall, this is a great activity for the Writing.com Community! Keep up the fantastic work! ![]() Disclaimer: The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.
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