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 Praising God: Miracles and Wisdom Open in new Window. [E]
God’s grace and mercy - a poem.
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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I love a good poem, and a spiritual poem is all the better. You’ve done a wonderful job creating a charming, old fashioned poem that feels like a hymn or something from an antique Christian magazine.

The meter flows perfectly, carrying the important message of repentance, faith and obedience that is crucial to understanding the love of God and the ways He cares for us. Your rhymes are sensible and proper without being overly trite, and the entire piece is a joy to read. The promise of God’s love as we turn towards Him in prayer and praise is always something we should remember, and though I struggle with religion and faith personally, I’m glad to read something here that speaks of such things in a thoughtful and positive way.

As someone who dabbles casually and cautiously in poetry, I don’t have anything to offer as to structure or format here. I detest measuring meter and counting syllables, and if I write poetry I prefer to do it by instinct, somewhat similar to how I occasionally write song lyrics. Free verse is easier, but sometimes I stumble across a fairly good meter in spite of myself. At any rate, I have an instinct for what makes a good poem, and this is one.

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