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Hi Jeremy,

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Forty-Five

First Impression: It's looking awfully close to more stains in our future. So many crimes and convicted of none. We used to comment on the lawlessness of Somalia, Syria, Venezuala, Honduras and South Africa as being dangerous but all we're showing the world is that criminals can be get away with anything. They can become President.

What needs your attention: Not a thing. The orange last line in each stanza a mockery of the orange buffoon is perfect.

What part I liked best: I agree with each stanza with the sentiment when it was written but I don't think we should be sleeping at night. We're facing dangerous times if that monster is elected. He'll turn this country into a dictatorship, tossing everything the constitution stands for away.

Overall impression: I can't believe people are funding the go-fund me account to pay his legal fees. No one would do that for you or me. His children aren't any better. I don't think the stain will ever leave the world's memory. We're a laughingstock now, imagine how bad it will look if he is re-elected.

This is a cool approach in showing what damage was done by the stain called 45.

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What does the Fox say????? Excellent, Jeremy!


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