Greetings Joy !

I am currently reviewing as part of the tasks set by the "Game of Thrones" . I especially visited your port to dig your most precious gems then this piece appeared. In this review, I mainly focus on the positives of your piece and I may point some Areas for Improvement if found any. Without much a do, here are the things I noticed after delving deeper into the contents:


This poem titled "Into the Wind" is an evocative piece that weaves together rich imagery and strategic repetition to create a powerful call for liberation and self-discovery. The insistent refrain of "It's time, it's time" establishes a sense of urgency and anticipation for a transformative experience.

The speaker yearns to break free from the ordinary, comparing themself to a trapeze artist. This daring performer thrives on risk and embodies a spirit of carefree exhilaration. The act of kicking heels "into the wind" evokes the effortless soaring of a hawk, further emphasizing the speaker's desire for a life unbound by limitations. The evocative phrase "endless, reckless" isn't just a description; it's a declaration. It signifies a willingness to embrace a future without boundaries, fueled by a thirst for adventure.

The second stanza introduces a fascinating duality. The speaker ponders the roles of "A thief or mystic," hinting at a potential to be both daring and insightful. The image of sipping champagne on a "fiery wire" is a captivating paradox. It portrays a life lived on the edge, teetering between danger and exhilaration. Yet, this precarious existence is also fueled by inspiration, with the "fiery wire" transformed into a platform for artistic expression. The "poetic motif" suggests that the speaker finds beauty and meaning woven into the very fabric of their journey.

The final stanza takes a more personal turn, introducing the concept of devotion. The speaker pledges to sing the songs and name of a beloved, with "lips bewitched." This powerful connection acts as a catalyst for the speaker's transformation. "New sight, new pitch" suggests a profound shift in perspective, a willingness to explore uncharted territories both internally and externally. The final image of "floating and soaring" echoes the earlier bird imagery and reinforces the feeling of liberation. It's a culmination of the yearning expressed earlier, signifying a sense of weightlessness and freedom.

"Into the Wind" transcends a simple call for change. It's a poem that captures the essence of a human yearning for a life that is both thrilling and meaningful. The strategic repetition creates a sense of momentum, leaving the reader eager to witness the speaker's transformation and the exhilarating, uncharted territory that lies ahead. Thank you for sharing this. Write on!

Best regards,
Gervic