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Hi Stoneheart

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Random Ideas and Poems

First Impression: The entries I read don't match the handle you chose at all. Your writing shows you're passionate and inspired by love.

Were you able to put the lyrics to Face to the Floor to music. The lyrics clearly demonstrate a heart given and a heart broken waiting for the right musical accompaniment.

What needs your attention: I'm going to put it out there, where's more recent entries. It's been almost five months since your last post.

What part I liked best: Love is a many splintered thing entry I enjoyed immensely because I could connect with them. My husband tell me my eyes remind him of a frozen lake dark beneath the chilled exterior. I think he's a puzzle that for the life of me I haven't solved. Maybe that's what life and love are supposed to be. I can relate a lot to Wilde's quote but differently than you. My first marriage was hell and my second is heaven and my heart floats in the unknown of what lies ahead.

Overall impression: Enjoyable reads thus far in your book. The entries are well articulated. I hope to see more entries in the future.

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What does the Fox say?????


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