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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

"Game of Thrones"  Hello fellow writer. My name is Sandra. I am one of the sly foxes. Title: Buggers the Cat First Impression: This is a cute story. So, this is a typical campfire creative. You started the story ball rolling and then other writers joined in with their contributions. Each addition further highlights the adventures of Buggers, the cat. The sidelines, the tangents are random and funny. The exploits are only limited by imagination, aren't they? Until you ended it this story had the potential to carry on indefinitely. Each little bit resembled the vague ramblings of a feline. What part needs your attention: Once you unleash this there's not much you can control other than the beginning and the end. You can contribute your creative thoughts, but then other writers continue with their own ideas. You cannot correct their spelling, or grammar. This exercise is to stoke creativity and I suppose free form writing. "Scrambling to his feet, Buggers took one last jest at Fido..." Jest?? Swipe? Peek? Jeer? a jest is a joke, not a verb. Is this a typo, or autocorrect? What part I liked best: I like your introduction. "Light hearted and silly is good." Yes, not all writing need be serious. The storyline rambled everywhere and Buggers lived many of his nine lives with his various escapades. The spontaneity is fun and the surprises prove entertaining. If only it were true that Buggers would amend his explorations and wanderings in favour of staying home where he is safe. Perhaps there will be a sequel? Does Buggers wander off again? felines are the perfect animals for this kind of story-telling. Overall Impression: This story chain proved to be amusing and somewhat believable. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure. What does the fox say??? Listen carefully.(1905 characters) DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions in this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.