Hi Webwitch, I'm back again. This time, I had the honor of reading this enchanting poem. I found this poem to be full of wonder, delight, and beauty. Very nicely done.

I've been working on using more descriptive words in my writing, so such descriptions are fresh in my mind. I can see that you were able to do this in a smooth and flawless manner. I believe you are able to present your expert writing as a dazzling painted picture in the minds of your readers.

The picturesque scene is set from the very first stanza. Although I've yet to know what place Mohonk is, I can get the feeling of it from your beautiful poetic words.

I think you easily succeeded in awakening all of your reader's senses. We can feel and hear the gentle breeze and we can feel the warmth of the sun; we can take in the sweet scent of the flowers; we can see the pretty cherry blossom trees. You expressed that the scene is intoxicating, which brings the feeling of knowing how amazing it all is.

Your second stanza, made me think that this enchanting place makes us feel that our soul has been inside of a cocoon and is only now revitalized. Of course, you say all of that in an outstanding way through remarkable poetry. I'm forever impressed. Last night I read your detective story, which you wrote in the style of a 1930s gangster, and now today I'm reading the poetry of an artist! The brilliant talent displayed is in your portfolio for sure!

I loved the sounds you mentioned of the night animals scattering across the dried leaves.

The moonbeams in the darkness did sound glorious! I found your poem to be a very pleasant item to read.

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