Whoa, what a stunning and beautiful story we have here! I love it, and heeding your request at the bottom that we don’t offer suggestions as to changing it would be easy. Honestly, I can’t think of a thing I would change about it, aside from the basic and monotonous observation to use Size 4 Verdana font, which I’ve said to you enough times already

The cherished moments of a newly minted family are heartfelt and touching, reminding us that families should be whole and happy and sometimes the very Angel we need to help us heal is the one we have unknowingly “entertained at our home…” I’m thinking of a quote from the Book of Hebrews right now (13:2…)

It also reminds us how “all things work for good” and even the darkest tragedy has light at the end of the tunnel. It is a story of hope and resilience, of a mother’s love that stretched across the boundaries of life and provided an answer to the problems caused by such sudden loss.

This is a striking work, and for a newbie it’s quite commendable. I would hope some of my work leaves a lasting impression in such a way.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing