"The Iron Bank of Braavos"  "Game of Thrones" 

My name is Angelica, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Red Rocks

First Impression: There's Sacred Mystery in spine of the red rocks. The speaker finds peace in the divine of the red rocks. Such beauty, vibrant colors explode in the speaker's eyes at the first sight of the red rocks. The speaker and her love one set up picnic in the mountain and make toast in the wine of the red rocks. "Sunset and sunrise paint masterpieces" day and night and the speaker sees her path in the "shine of the red rocks". Heart's home in this ghostly place "amongst cathedral of the red rocks".

Great details in the sentences. Everything is about the red rocks. The beautiful and colorful rocks as described. There is so many parts to them, different characteristics that describe each trait. First there is the spine, then there is the divine. Then there is the first sight. Then the wine. Shine. Last but not least is cathedral. These are all parts of the red rocks talked about in the poem figuratively. Great job with the details. The voice is natural. It is consistent with each stanza providing the same great details in a natural manner. The speaker is the one speaking.

What needs your attention: No spelling or grammar errors found.

Could print this poem and share it with your family. Put it on the refrigerator.

What part I liked best: The details about the beauty of the rocks. Also the sunset and sunrise scene. Again I have more than one favorite part about the poem. I can't choose a best.

Overall impression: Great details and natural voice. It seems this poem is freestyle, but is actually Ghazal, which works out greatly. Not all poems have to rhyme. It fits with the drop note underneath. This one tells a story about the red rocks. Good job and keep up the good work!

Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.

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What does the Fox say?????

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