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 | The Time Crystal  [E] Izzy must learn how to restore the forest's fading magic. Word Count: 650  |
| Hello Krista! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones" . This is a cute children's story. Short enough to keep a child's attention but long enough to entertain, thrill, and make the child eager to find out what will happen next. It's creative and imaginative. Nice job!The Title and Description - Great title that drew my attention to the story. The description sums up the story nicely and urges me to read on. The Storyline/Plot - A little girl must find the magical crystal to save the magic of the forest, which is quickly fading. The Characters - We are able to learn the little girl's personality pretty well. I would have liked at least a paragraph to talk about the friends she had with her. We get to see them in action in the end, but it would have been nice to know them a little before the showdown. The Setting - I would have liked to read about the magic fading and how it was affecting the woods a little. But I was able to envision each scene as I read. Good job! What I Liked Best - I liked it when it got to the showdown, and her friends helped her save the magic crystal. And I liked the ending. Nicely done.  I'll have to read this to my little granddaughter. Thank you so much for sharing your writing with us.  Tracey"When you play the Game of Thrones you win, or you die." Cersei Lannister  The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 04/25/2024 @ 11:34am EDT