\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4747426
Review #4747426
Viewing a review of:
 Days of Yore Open in new Window. [13+]
GoT, Writing Prompt Piggy-Back & Dreams
by Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ Author Icon
Review of Days of Yore  Open in new Window.
Review by NaNoNette Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | N/A (Review only item.)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
A "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window. review from
The Free Folk image for G.o.T.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.


Hello Ẃeβ࿚ẂỉԎḈĥ Author Icon

First impression:

Oh, a Game of Thrones item from 2017! What a coincidence that I am here with a review for it in 2024 during GoT.

What works:

This story was narrated from a first person point of view, which helped me feel very connected to the events. The whole tableau of the family of the protagonist and the families from the rich part of town all together, having innocent fun and not worrying about the next day together was very peaceful to read.

What needs work:

I am sure there are a few thumbnails from the vast image library that StoryMistress has set up for us could embellish this item to make it stand out some more.

Final thoughts:

I enjoyed reading this piece a lot. It left me with a smile. And with the desire to go find a pond and play in the water. Although I have to say that I was lucky enough to be able to give my kids a similar (not same) experience by living in an apartment complex with a swimming pool for almost 14 years , thus giving them the chance to have piggy back rides on their father's back. When the youngest son was very little, we would pick him up under his feet and toss him from the shallow end into the deep end. It was a little sad when he became too big to do that any longer. But we all have many fond memories of long days spent in and around that pool with the other complex kids and their families enjoying the fresh water.

Annette
"The WDC Angel Army" Open in new Window.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 04/23/2024 @ 9:30pm EDT
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4747426