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Hi Amy

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Three Migratory Birds

First Impression: I've been very fortunate to have seen them all three while I lived in Maine. The Artic Tern were on Machias Seal Island although the numbers that nest there have reduced drastically because of sea gulls.
Barn swallows made nests in the barn so they were always around and quite welcome because of the mosquitos.
Puffins I hadn't seen until 2019 Wow, they're so cute.

What needs your attention: I didn't note any punctuation or grammar issues.

What part I liked best: The author and I share a common interest in the Atlantic Puffin. Their coloring is similar to a penguin and equally as playful. My son took us out on a lobster boat and we got to see puffins playing on the small island. They slid down the rocks into the water and then back up again. I was surprised to see how quickly one of them devoured a fish. I have no idea what kind because it was gone fast.

Overall impression: The author discussed three migratory birds that are very common in Maine as well as where she resides in Canada. I hadn't thought about my own interactions until I read this piece and took a brief stroll down memory lane.

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