"Game of Thrones"  "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 



Hi

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: A Poets Rambling

First Impression: Looks like you're going to have move it into a different folder, it's been reviewed twice. Your poetic rambling is very engaging and made a few connections with this reader. I love reading before bed but before I settle in for the night I always glance up at the night sky and say good night to the moon.

What needs your attention: Nothing this poem has good pacing and the rhyming totally works. It feels natural. But this reader would prefer write yourself a poem a message with a game plan. instead of tying it to man.

What part I liked best: Taking time to appreciate the good in everything around us can't be said enough. Our world is filled with so much negativity that this line should be a daily mantra.

Overall impression: This five stanza with a rhyming pattern of aabb worked very well in conveying a positive message to readers. It was engaging and easily read out loud. That's a quirk of mine, reading any poem I review out loud because I hear the sounds and feel the cadence.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure.


What does the Fox say????? Poetry gives voice to everything in life.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .