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Hi The BusmanPoet

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: GAIA

First Impression: Have I found a fellow Wiccan among the many authors on this site. Beltane is soon approaching, and it is a great time to focus on creativity and prosperity.
There is nothing more joyful than listening to nature's incredible symphony with one's soul mate as the author reminded the reader. I've spent many evening sitting with my spouse enjoying the moon's glorious display.

What needs your attention: Nothing, the stanzas build upon each other and the cadence is perfect when read out loud.

What part I liked best: This stanza appeals to me.
Gaia with Her ever engaging --melodic night songs,--are singing to them.

The reader is reminded of walks together and evenings sitting together simply absorbing all of nature's bounty. We lived near a stream in Maine, the sounds of the cricket, tree frogs and the chatter of racoons made our evenings so special.

Overall impression: This reader is reminded in this five stanza, fifteen line tribute to Gaia and her blessings how priceless those moments are shared with the one we love.

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What does the Fox say?????


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