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Hi Joy,

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Weaknessess Strengthen the Story

First Impression: Weaknesses in a person are appealing to people in real life becasue we always want to fix someone that is broken. But as you noted weaknesses whether moral of psychological add to the character's persona and also can be the theme.

What needs your attention: Nothing, you're writing is enviable to me. Yeah, I know practice is key.

What part I liked best: I saw the list and I wondered why emotional detachment wasn't listed. Someone who never wants anyone, any possession, anything, has negativity buried inside. Whether its driven by hatred, jealousy or anger is up to the author. Or does it have more of mental illness connection which would put it on another list. Although you do have ignorance as a mental factor. Maybe I'm not understanding this article as much as I first thought.

Overall impression: Enjoyable read and a great refresher now that I'm actually writing more than just blogging. Though my poor blog must be missing me by now.

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What does the Fox say????? Review 5 of 10. We're halfway there, my friend.


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .