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 Dulcet Drops Open in new Window. [ASR]
HEAT... in all its meanings. A Bite Size Poetry Entry
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Review of Dulcet Drops  Open in new Window.
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW

This is a review for "Dulcet Drops" Open in new Window. from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window.

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*Reading* THE POEM

The poem captures a sensual in the heat of a kiss.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

Nice word play here to imply something much more heated - not only the physicality of the moment, but the intensity of the persons feelings and emotions. Not only is word play succinct, the author uses a good economy of words to paint the picture of Dulcet Drops.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a two stanza poem with four lines each. The 2nd and 4th lines rythme in the quatrains.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. My only suggestion would be to increase the font on WDC to make it easier on the eyes.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "I lower my lips to your liquescent skin." - liquescent is a word that's not very common, but the author gives you the definition in the notes which, once understood makes it the perfect word for this place in the poem. It's a great visual that I can picture in my imagination.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

I liked the notes section at the end of the poem. It helps the reader to understand the word choices. The notes give the meaning of Dulcet, and once understand, makes the title the perfect fit for the poem. The opening engages the reader. Well done!

Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen

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