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Hi Joy

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Food In Writing

First Impression: I've just written two poems on food, it's not as easy as one might think. The acrostic was easy but when I did the ode, I really had to think hard how to tie it all together. I should go back and think of the dynamites as a character. It's not usually my genre but Gaby put it out there.
We missed your talents so very much.

What needs your attention: Not a thing.

What part I liked best: Using our senses as means of moving the story I've heard that before but never tried it. I've had some interesting disasters with food I should try putting into a story. Your suggestions are pretty good and I'm looking forward to trying different recipes with my characters. Looking at my life I definitely have lots of food fodder to use.

Overall impression: Playing with your ideas sounds like fun. Food and idea of cooking does inspire imagination. Like the author I love food I don't usually read stories with food as the core but maybe I should. Who knows I might find some interesting reading.

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What does the Fox say????? Review 8 out of 10


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .