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 | A Simple Touch  [E] No need for words... A Daily Poem Entry (Form: Quatrains)  |
| (5.0)| GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW This is a review for "A Simple Touch" from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones"  The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  THE POEMA poem that tugs on the reader's heartstrings as it communicates the power of a simple touch.  WHAT I LIKEDI loved the uplifting message of the poem. There's something powerful about reaching out to other humans in a kind, compassionate way and this poem captures the essence of that gesture.  STRUCTUREThis is a three stanza poem comprised of quatrains. The 1st and 2nd lines along with the 3rd and 4th lines rythme. The poem is has a nice beat when read out loud. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make it easier to read on WDC. The poem is easy to read. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "For the homeless on the street, who beg for change so they can eat," -- the words create an easy visual in the reader's imagination, but they also hint at an emotional description, one of hopeless, which sets up the inspiring message the rest of the poem delivers. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe title is an accurate fit for the poem, and the opening drawers the reader in. This an honest, candid, poem that ends on a note of hope. Well done. Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen  }
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