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 | A real nightmare  [E] In our days we experience stress daily and it is the enemy of our health  |
| (3.5)   Greetings, writer! I am reviewing this because I am discovered it on Read & Review.  I also noticed that you are new here at WDC! Welcome! If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. I did notice, too, that you've filled out your BIO already. Good for you! It is, however, written in another language (French?) so I couldn't read it, since I only know English. First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked Aw...the dreaded panic attack! I had never known of such a thing until I experienced it for the first time in my late twenties. Like you wrote: The family, the job and all I had to do i no longer had any time for leisure. That will do it! It's so important to take a little time for ourselves IF that is possible. Your title fits perfectly, as panic attacks are A real nightmare. I noticed that you've filled out the genre option as Health. Good choice! Suggestions/Comments to Consider You also have two other genre options. You might consider Experience, too. And Personal. Or maybe some other genre. It's up to you, of course.  There are only a few little typos, which could be because English is your second language, for example: than disappear = then disappear Final ThoughtsThis is a great topic and one that many readers can relate to. I noticed that you have this listed as a short story, but I got the impression that you were sharing an experience you were having. If the latter is the case, you might want to change it to Non-fiction. If I'm incorrect, please disregard! Again, Welcome to Writing.com! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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