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Review #4756155
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Blogocentric Formulations Open in new Window. [18+]
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by Jeff Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "A Sky Full of Stars" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Hello, Jeff! Thank you for supporting this great activity!

*Checkb*Overall Impression:
Your brief opinion piece gives a fair and nuanced perspective on Coldplay, highlighting a balance of respect against your personal preferences. Your understanding of the band's songwriting and cultural impact is evident, but it's fair to distinguish between recognizing Coldplay's popularity and not entirely understanding why. The piece is engaging and relatable, making it a thoughtful read. For what it's worth, I don't understand the outsized popularity, either.

*Checkb*Title and Description:
The title didn't give me much to go on - I didn't realize it was a media prompt. That said, I know media prompts aren't always pieces we keep around or expect much longevity from.

*Checkb*Content and Flow:
The piece is well-structured, logically progressing from discussing Coldplay's impact and specific songs to personal reflections on the band's overall appeal. The transition between paragraphs is smooth, maintaining a cohesive narrative that keeps the reader engaged. Being a media prompt, there isn't a significant depth required, but you have still managed to keep a balanced and honest point of view. It provides some nuance to the straightforward activity requirements.

*Checkb*Grammar and Mechanics:
Overall, it's fine, but this sentence is a bit clunky: My personal favorite occurrence of this song, however, is the cover that Taron Egerton did for the animated film Sing 2, with his character (Johnny the Gorilla) performed this song during the final performance they had been working toward.

*Checkb*Final Thoughts:
This was a solid response to the media prompt, providing something for readers to reflect on without over-analyzing the subject in relation to the prompt requirements.

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Jayngle Bells Author Icon*Smile*

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