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 Mirage Part One Open in new Window. [ASR]
Kyle learns by hard experience that not everything it what it first appears to be.
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Review by Past Member 'ashok25'
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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The story begins with a common problem. Kyle was the main character of the first chapter. We often see that a young adult feels too shy to express his love. This problem was highlighted in this chapter. But he had an accident. He was in a coma.
We entered another part of the story. The real part. Fantasy began to flourish in the second chapter. Keil played the key role. Other characters were also crucial. Anyhow, they crossed the first of the three parts to "Mirage". What will happen in the next two parts?
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