\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4763038
Review #4763038
Viewing a review of:
 Us(Us) Open in new Window. [E]
Relationship
by Ang1974 Author Icon
Review of Us(Us)  Open in new Window.
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Free Folk  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
Nice job with this! I thought the piece was concise, to the point, and well articulated. I thought the rhyme scheme in particular was really effective and worked well for the piece. Overall, I don’t have any suggestions for improvement. Well done on this!

*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 07/13/2024 @ 11:58pm EDT
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4763038