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 | A Love Letter from the Boogeyman  [13+] My name is Nox, and I live under your bed.  |
| (5.0)| Hello teeflies, I found your first story in an area where a new member's writing appears. I picked yours because I was drawn in by the title. A universal character, the Boogeyman, conjured up my own experience with him. I have read and now will review your story. This is only one person's opinions. I hope they will resonate with you. First impression: I appreciate the genres you selected. You chose the three you are allowed which will give your story maximum exposure. Many of us choose what we want to read by things we like. I am trying to read more horror or scary pieces. I tend to gravitate toward autobiographical stories. The presentation is ideal with rewarding content broken up by an occasional dialogue which was appropriate. Content: The story is original and memorable. My Boogeyman was in my bedroom closet. The closet was built under the stairs going to the attic so it was really dark at the end of it. Your two characters came vividly into the story with equal importance. Closing: The end of the story could very well be the end of the first chapter of a marvelous book. Recommendations: The dialogue and descriptions were wonderful. I was left wanting more. I was a little puzzled at the kitchen knife. It is plausible, but kind of added an edgy element. You are new to our community and we welcome you! There are so many things to see and do here. Your story I am rating the maximum 5 stars, which is extra special because that rating goes to the best of the best. I would not doubt you are a published author, and if not you are a terrific imaginative writer. I read this by chance but enjoyed it more than any story I have read probably all year so far! Please write some more soon. I have done what we called fan'd you so we can be friends. I will leave more information about that in your notebook. Congratulations on your story. I will recommend it to some friends who should also give you some feedback. Write on! tracker  
   My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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