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 |  | The Camino de Santiago  [E] My brave and determined friend  |
| (5.0)   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"   Greetings, H❀pe! I am reviewing this because I am part of WdC Anniversary Reviewing Team, and today is your very first anniversary here! That is special, indeed.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked Oh, this was definitely a heart tugger. For such an emotional piece, I felt you presented it very well! It's more difficult for me to write non-fiction vs fiction. I just don't feel I do non-fiction well. That's why it's hard for me to blog. But you? Wow. I envy your flow and how everything falls into place in this piece.  I can't imagine how emotional this must've been. You were not only a wonderful step-daughter, but also a caring friend, who did everything possible to help Linda through her final journey. Your virtual trip with her—the one she had hoped to travel—was a beautiful gift. Ugh. What an emotional piece!  Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderI found nothing in which needed changing. If there were any typos here, I did not notice, as I was totally absorbed in your writing. That, to me, is the most important thing of all. Well done! Final ThoughtsI'm so glad you found this community! You're a great addition. Once again, Happy 1st WdC Anniversary!  A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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