Hello, Lobelia is truly blessed!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I read your humorous non-fiction story and enjoyed it.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I love your handle! May the Lord bless you even more!

Between your lovely handle, this story, and a poem of yours that I liked (and of which tucked away the link for a future review), I decided to "fan" you.

I appreciated your sense of humor throughout this piece. And, wow, you've got a family of nine! Does that mean you have seven children? You must be a wonder woman!

My favorite line was the last: "I never had to say a thing. But funny thing- he never wears that coat anymore!" LOl! No wonder! (Anyone reading this review really ought to read her story to see what I mean here - it's short and easy to read and worth the couple of minutes.)

I wondered if your husband was one of the men in the picture at the bottom or if that was just to show the kind of coat? I also wondered if this was written for a contest here? Perhaps the daily flash fiction contest or Lornda's humorous short story contest?

If you haven't already entered it in Lornda's humorous short story contest, I recommend that you do. I think she'd like it a lot. I don't remember the exact name of the contest but here's her handle so you can check her notebook: Lornda

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your humorous non-fiction story.

I thought the comedy, family, and experience genres you selected were perfect for this humorous non-fiction story of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!

The only things I could think to improve have nothing to do with your story's writing, it would be just to add a little note section answering the questions I had. Probably I'm not the only one who would wonder about those two things. But it's totally up to you, of course. Just my two cents.


CONCLUSION:
I enjoyed reading your humorous non-fiction story, and thank you for posting it here on our site for us to read.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, experiences, sense of humor, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler












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