Hello, Drew aka alew35!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

I enjoyed reading your poem and it made me feel glad to have read it.

Your writing kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. I know it is a short poem, but I can still get distracted if the writing isn't good and yours was great. Well done.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I found this lovely poem in the Anniversary Reviews forum and loved it so decided to give you my review today. I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting and encouraging.

I could totally relate to this "Have Faith" inspirational poem of yours. We all go through hard times, me included. Faith in the Lord, and the Lord Himself, are what sees me through.

I liked that you kept to the traditional syllable count for haiku poems of 5-7-5 syllables. I know there's a whole school of folks who like to go random with it, but I like this format personally.

My favorite line was: "Hope's whisper guides the lost soul," because I thought it was lovely and unique. The whole poem is lovely though.

I hope that you are able to have faith through whatever trials you faith and I thank you for this inspiring poem. Maybe it will encourage someone else to have faith too.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your inspirational poem.

I thought the inspirational, spiritual, and writing genres you selected were appropriate for this inspirational poem of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!


As with any review, please take what serves you and release or ignore what doesn't.


CONCLUSION:

I enjoyed reading your inspirational poem, and could totally relate to your sentiments expressed in it.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, faith, experiences, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

Once again, happy anniversary month! I hope the year ahead is filled with blessings and joy for you!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










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