Hi Bashar,

This is a fantastic poem. The tone is forlorn and filled with pain but, still, tinged with hope. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The poem is about the displacement of refugees and how the separation from friends and family affects them emotionally. I feel so sorry for anyone having to flee their home to seek safety elsewhere. I loved this poem and read to the last word. The free verse works well in this poem, and you have handled it very well. There is a wonderful rhythm here. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job.