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 God's Calling . . . Can You Hear Him? Open in new Window. [E]
Being silent and listening to God
by Lazy Writer est 4/24/2008 Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hello! I am affiliated with more than one review group, and it was the Space Blog prompt that brought me here today.

I didn't notice any spelling, grammar or punctuation errors. I also double checked with Grammarly. When reading the poem out loud, the rhyme and rhythm are pleasing to the ears.

First the poem points out how God is everywhere and in everything. Then it points out that he is in other people too. These other people sometimes need you to show them the God in you.

Overall, I really enjoyed reading the poem. Great Job! I look forward to reading more of your work.

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