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 A Dying Flower Bush  Open in new Window. [E]
This quick poem is about a bush that I see about every day.
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Review by Lornda Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Bulletbr* I found your poem via the Read & Review feature, and I enjoyed reading it! The first stanza hooked me right into the topic of the flower bush and set the scene. From there the story continues to describe the garden and by the time we get to the end, it comes back to the flower bush. I thought it was a well-rounded poem and told a beautiful story. *Stary*

*Bulletbr* When I saw the genres, I noticed you selected 'Nonsense'. I don't consider it to be that. Lol! I would change the second option to, 'Home/Garden', and maybe the third either 'Biographical', or 'Personal'. If you go for the more popular genres, you'll get more readers dropping by. *Wink*

*Bulletbr* I'm glad I had the opportunity to stop by. It was a good way to start my day by reading about nature. It's beautifully written, and I could visualize the whole story, so good work on the word choice. Keep up the great work. Welcome to Writing.Com, and enjoy the site. *WDCLogo*

~Lornda

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