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*Bulletbr* Welcome to Writing.Com! I found you story via the Read & Review feature, and I enjoyed reading it. The first sentence is a good hook, and the rest of the paragraph did a great job on setting the scene. The structure was done well because we're not sure what the parrot is talking about, so it set it up like a mystery to find out more. Nicely done! *Stary*

*Bulletbr* It was fun to read how all the pieces of what the parrot said fell together in what Billie uncovered. I thought it read smooth and only found one little typo: I reached into [it] feeling... Even though it has a short word count, I liked the fact that it told a whole story, and I think there could be a part two to see where the adventure takes Bille next. Keep up the great work, and enjoy the site!

~Lornda

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