First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you and leave the rest.
The Positives/What I Liked
I loved this! Even before I realized they were a lyrics, I'd thought This would make a great song! Do you play the guitar? Piano? Very impressive. My favorite:
How did it get so late so soon?
How did it get so late?
Take a trip down memory lane
Remember your rose tinted glasses
Bad times are shackles and chains
We are all but ashes
Suggestions/Comments to Consider
I have no suggestions. I love this just the way it is.
Final Thoughts
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