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Red flowers of the Silver Maple Open in new Window. [E]
this cold March day, a splash of color on silver threads, embroidered on the sky- blue sky
by Kåre เลียม Enga Author Icon
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM
Visual onslaught of seasons and colors surrounding silver maples and red leaves.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I enjoyed the suggestive expression. For me, it was like an impressionist painting, just enough there to wet the appetite and let you, the reader, run with it.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem which compliments the expression.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Velcro hooks, at heart soft green, grow, unfurl their thin veined wings," An intriguing description of branches unfurling, gaining strength and depth.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening piques the reader's interest, drawing them in. Good word play and nice expression.

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