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THE POEM
Visual onslaught of seasons and colors surrounding silver maples and red leaves.
WHAT I LIKED
I enjoyed the suggestive expression. For me, it was like an impressionist painting, just enough there to wet the appetite and let you, the reader, run with it.
STRUCTURE
This is free form poem which compliments the expression.
MECHANICS
I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read.
DESCRIPTIONS
I liked: "Velcro hooks, at heart soft green, grow, unfurl their thin veined wings," An intriguing description of branches unfurling, gaining strength and depth.
PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS
The opening piques the reader's interest, drawing them in. Good word play and nice expression.
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