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I, Katrina Open in new Window. [13+]
In the spirit of I, Claudius, the empress arrives with a case of bad-breeze.
by Kåre เลียม Enga Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM
A poem about the empress of the wind and the waves.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the flow and progression of the story. How the reader meets Katrina and a certain point and finds out her fate.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a really nice flow when read out loud.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "I, Katrina, queenly robed, with bosomed bounty, lightning tressed, have rode the waves, and come well dressed" This is a great, vivid description that captures the essence of a woman fully in her power and understanding her power. Nice word play and very succinct.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening intrigues the reader, and keeps them reading - who is Katrina? Why has she come? The title fits the poem well. Great rythme and rhythm. Well done.

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