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Each day I desire, seek, knock, and pray.
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM
An inspirational poem about the saving power of the Lord.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked the upbeat, positive nature of the poem. It's very uplifting.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This a free form poem. There is an AABB rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "Victory assured, to us His great promise. God is true and He is very honest." Victory assured implies a battle. I would think an internal one, for some a belief in the Lord doesn't come easy and so we are reminded of the rewards - He is true and honest.

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The sets a tone of reverence which draws the reader into the poem. Nice, easy expression leads to poem that displays it's honesty. The message is heartfelt, sincere and respectful. The title fits the poem.

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