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 Review #4821252 |
 | The Flags of Arlington  [E] Every year, members of the 3rd Infantry place flags on the graves in Arlington Cemetary  |
| (5.0)   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM"Anniversary Reviews ~ Summer Break"   My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines. THE POEM A stirring poem centered around a solider placing flags on graves.  WHAT I LIKED The pictures are very stirring and compliment the poem well. I appreciated a little of background and history and how the author was inspired to take pen to paper.  STRUCTUREThis a free form poem. There is an AABB rythme scheme. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is heartfelt to read and has a nice flow when read out loud. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "He pauses a moment in front of a grave, I cried when I saw the salute he gave." The verse captures a framed moment in time, that contemplation which concludes with a gratitude and thankfulness that stirs in one's heart. It's easy visualize and evokes emotion well. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThere's a reverent, respectful tone to the poem which shines through; an appreciation that has been cultivated and is sincere. Clean expression that tugs on the heartstrings. The title is representative of the poem. An Angel Army Review
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You responded to this review 06/22/2025 @ 5:32pm EDT