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 Honesty is the Best Policy Open in new Window. [13+]
But sometimes, proverbs are not the best guides.
by THANKFUL SONALI Magical Days! Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Sonali!

I discovered this using the Random Read and Review button.

What a fun little story; when I first started reading I assumed they were little kids. It was a fun twist to discover they were all hard working teachers who were upset about "too much honesty" *Laugh*

I like how it ended, with friendship overriding what could have been super awkward for the rest of their lives! This was a great read, with large clear font and good formatting.

I would suggest adding a third relevant genre other than "contest entry;" you can say Melodrama, or Comedy, or Educational, or Friendship. You might also... Never mind, seeing how old it is, no one expects to be reminded of the prompt!

Congrats on your third place in What a Character! Glad to see you there *Hug1**Smile**Hug2*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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