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More Promptly Poetry PPC 5 Open in new Window. [13+]
More poems for Promptly Poetry, stuffed into this book because I have reached my limit.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings, Ned *Smile*

I'm here as a fellow member of the PPC5 challenge.

Wow, this is something. You've captured that picturesque sense of seashore and salt air and showed us how it lives in your soul and enlivens you. And your use of iambic pentameter is admirable. I also misread the prompt and had to stop myself like "wait, they didn't specify a particular meter form...?" *Confused*

I love how you've saved both versions for us to read and appreciate here. It makes it double the value. Perhaps a couple of strategically placed dropnotes would improve the sense of tidiness. Other than that, what an enjoyable piece. It feels like a true poem, like Emily Dickinson or someone from the 1800's.

In fact, I'll give the compliment I save for the extra special poetry: it's elegant enough to write out in fancy script and hang on the wall *Heartt*

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *Writer*



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