Hi, oldmonty,

This is the second poem in a row of 5 that I am about to review. Thanks for pointing out your poetry on the Newsfeed.

We are friends on Facebook, so I'll know how much this poet misses the one he still loves. Getting older and being without your spouse can be deadly. But it's also a goldmine to a true and dedicated poet. As you are. I love this poem because it has such a beautiful atmosphere of wonder, dedication, and despair, but without the gloom.

And the repetition of the word BLOW is so delicate and right at it, it makes this a really fine poem. The stanzas are wonderfully chosen and make the body of this poem very strong.

A beautiful rhyme and rhythm, very musical and refined indeed.

Thanks for sharing and keep on writing.

WakeUpAndLive

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